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 [NPC] Riley

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PostSubject: [NPC] Riley   Mon Dec 19, 2016 8:33 pm


General


Full Name: Riley
Nickname(s): N/A
Age: 17
Gender: Mono-gender
Race: Demi-human
Sexual orientation: Bisexual



Appearance



Height: 4`8 1/2
Weight: 74 Ibs
Eye Color: Deep scarlet
Hair Color: Rosé
Distinguishing Features: A mono-gender race, the demi-humans are distinctly feminine in appearance and possess maternal instincts. Their unique physiology, expressed in a two century-long lifespan and the ability to reproduce with a partner of any gender or species, gives them a conservative yet convivial attitude toward other races. The most significant features that Riley possess is her strikingly scarlet red hair which stands out quite vividly, in a similiar manner her eyes strike sometimes as "devilish" due to their predatory forms when angered.



Standing at around four foot eight and weights seventy-four pounds. Her blood type is AB. Riley`s body type could only be described as slim yet petite, her hair is silky sleek and groomed to perfection, she cares for her hair daily so as to maintain a quality that can stand next to her divine mistress. Her most prominent asset is her bottom, soft an firm. Her measurements are Bust:84 Waist:56 Hips:83 her skin is well kept and shaven.

She brushes her teeth at least three times a day keeping a good mouth hygiene. When angered a single horn manifests itself on her forehead dividing her hair that covers it. Her elegant appeal often breaks when she stumbles around, thus her body is often covered in bruises. She dyes her finger nails constantly with different colors.

Just like Ryd her usual outfit consist of a maid costume that she wears daily, as a result she has a great number of these in stock, the maid costume is hand crafted, its sleeves are made in separate pieces, in these stockings are also included, other costumes include but not limited to cat ears and tail which goes well with the maid costume, a police uniform, a waitress uniform, a sleek and tight ninja costume and a pirate costume.

More than proud enough to hold the banner of the cromwell family in respect to her mistress, Riley enjoys glamour and excusite parties.



Personality



    Riley Likes:
  • People watching: More like a hobby Riley likes to watch people from afar, going on about their daily lives. Learning their habits and such means a lot to her.
  • Animals: Having always had a liking for animals Riley thrives in the wild.
  • Cosplaying: Clothing something different is always fun.
  • Allisae Cromwell : This may not be entirely suprising, but the truth is much worse than that, its more like border line obsession rather than merely respect and loyalty, Riley worships the very ground she walks upon.
  • Watching Allisae sleep : On that note the more you know about Riley the creepier it gets, Allisae may not know how unlucky or lucky she is (depends who`s asking) but at least Riley has enough self control not to touch her outright. (most of the time)



    Riley Dislikes:
  • Dark arts/Necromancy: Black magic essentially, this sort of magic is banned by the magic council, therefore it stands to reason that the dark arts are to be feared but also hated, wizards with such magic should be detained (if not killed outright) People who resurrect corpses from the dead, are the worst kind of people, they do not respect the dead, they toy with their corpses, and abominate their very being, people who attacked her mistress will fear her like death. And the cultists who attacked her village will wish they where never born.
  • Others telling her what to do: Admittably a flaw but she does not mind when these orders come from people that she trusts.
  • Dishonesty: As if mistrusting strangers was not enough people who lie means they have something to hide, which means they could wish her mistress harm.




    Riley Fears:
  • Heights: Having always feared heights Riley becomes weak just thinking about it.
  • Betrayal: Finding it extremely hard to trust strangers Riley has confined her world within the walls of her mistresses mansion, rarely venturing outside its walls. She feels like she has been betrayed in the past by some people`s actions and cannot easily find trust in anyone.





Riley is much like her twin sibling a thoughtful person, but usually only towards people she likes, Riley suffers from a psycological disability (OCD) , though it is usually not perceivable, however in the presence of her mistress she shows her obsession more clearly than to anyone, she is ready willing and able to risk her life for her in any given situation no matter how insignificant it may seem. While her obsession is a case of concern it cannot be denied that it has its uses.

However more often than not is it an actual danger rather than being useful, Riley gets easily distracted with her mistress around.

Riley is a clutz and not particularly talented at anything, while on a first glance she may seem like a kind person she does not shy away from being quite blunt and to the point with her thoughts. If for some reason someone insults her mistress she will loose her cool personality, her courteous behavior is then thrown out the window, and any insults will be thrown back a hundred fold.

If by some odd chance her mistress gets hurt because of a strangers actions she will get beyond upset, this transgression cannot be forgiven no matter what (even if it was an accident), and she WILL try to claim the savages life. Riley L❤VES cosplaying almost as much as she L❤VES her mistress, and usually makes her own clothes for such an occasion, she then makes sure to get into the character one hundred percent. She sometimes borrows her clothes to Ryd, whom enjoys certain costumes as well. Riley`s real talent (and only one) lies in making her own costumes as well as repairing old ones.




History




The history of demons, is not a fond one nor one that has a happy ending, as demons are generally thought evil. As such Demi-humans are persecuted almost anywhere they go. The story that is about to unfold is no different.

In the coastal town of Horst, there was one such family, they had moved after narrowly escaping death from some cultists, who had burned down their village. Now they made a living in this town, it was not like living with your own kind, people looked down at their kind. There was not a single day that passed that they where not reminded of this, Rydiana and Riley lived like this for three long years, it was rare for twins to be born as Demi-humans and survive. It was said that Demi-humans where weaker if they where born as twins with just one horn.

This however did not seem to apply to them, their parents where proud of their daughters. One day their father was accused of thievery, and he was executed withouth a trial. Then a few days later the truth was found out to be another human who had "misplaced" his stash. Riley gradually changed to hate humans, and while Ryd shared her sisters hate she did not cling to it.

Now their family faced tough times, since only Sharon their mother could work, they could not bring enough money to feed them, to make matters worse one day Sharon got sick, she told her daughters to take the money that she had gathered buy some food and leave this village at once, go to their uncle in the mountains. But the twins refused to leave her side and instead went to pick a doctor. Sharon was against the idea but did not have the strenght to argue.

Knowing that her death was coming she begged her daughters to leave at once... they refused, once the doctor came he told them to wait outside, sometime passed and the doctor came out declaring that she was dead and that there was nothing he could do to save her, he stated dryly, refusing to belive the doctors lies, the twins ran inside, Breaking them. Riley saw their mother limp on the bed, she seemed almost like she was asleep. Had it not been for the fact that she had already grown cold.

On the table there was a bottle with a skull on it. Ryd recognized the mark, it was the sign for poison. Ryd screamed, as she snapped her mind going blank, she killed the doctor on the spot and went on a rampage in the village, unable to stop her sister she watched her raze the village to the ground.

A travelling Knight came to the town a week later, having heard the rumor of terrible monsters rampaging in the village of Horst, what he found was not any monsters but two children, one on the verge of starvation, Ryd had given all her food that she had to Riley, it was not much but enough to last for a couple of days.

The knight approached the girls, a honorable man no doubt. Riley tensed up as the man appeared, pointing a sword towards him that she barely had enough strength to hold up. She screamed for the man to leave before she ran towards him using what little strength she had left to swing her sword down at the man, the knight laid down his sword and took the slash of the blade withouth hesitation, brushing aside her blade with his hand, a bunch of blood flew as his hand was cut partially from his shoulder.

The knight then embraced the rose haired girl, catching her off guard "where are your parents?" This caught Riley off guard her eyes widening in shock. "t-they are gone, just like everyone else" she said with a shaking voice before she collapsed. The knight saw his sister in even worse shape, he took them in, made camp, shared some of his food,bandaged their wounds, told a story, reflected upon their nature, smiled and eventually made peace with the girls.




Statistics



Physical: 10
Magical: 25
Intellectual: 10


Fighting Style: Rydiana is better in almost anything and combat is no different, speed, strength, endurance she is optimal in all fields Riley on the other hand has little credibility but each of them support each other for the higher cause, increasing their combat efficiency. Rydiana is better with the chain mace since her strenght overpowers Riley`s capabilities easily, Riley posesses a greater pool of magi allowing her to cast spells more efficiently than Rydiana, Riley speciality is wind magic. So Riley often supports Rydiana from a distance using wind magic for support such as giving her a higher ground advantage. Rydiana usually engages in mid to close combat, but can also use magic to a lesser extent.

Volcana: Posessing the spiritual powers of a fire demon, Riley is capable of enveloping her body with molten magma and flames, as a result she is nearly immune to fire. She uses fire to her advantage whenever fighting a strong opponent or when cornered. Accompanied this with her magical spear chastifiel, which has the power of leviation and several other forms, she is indeed a tough combatant especially for a fire mage. Normally content and observant when angered however Riley can become careless and rush headlong into battle withouth thinking about the consiquenses.




Miscellaneous


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Blood Type: AB

Items of Significance: Spear: Chastifiel

Mount: Red Lizard

Position: Staff



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PostSubject: Re: [NPC] Riley   Sat Dec 31, 2016 10:09 pm

I see no issue, 1/2 Approval
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PostSubject: Re: [NPC] Riley   Mon Jan 02, 2017 11:14 am

Greetings! Administrator Alexeivichi here, I will be reviewing your application for the character Riley. On a more casual note: This is a pretty well written one, Hikaru. I can tell you spent a large portion of your time working on this with a lot of passion. I congratulate you to the fullest on its completion and future acceptance.

This application is pretty genuine, I can't really find any flaws on it. There is just one major exception to this however, it will be at the last part of this review.

First off I'd like to say your use of images on the application is very interesting and very creative of you. Images to help with illustrations are very helpful to establishing the appearance of the character instead of relying on solely written descriptions.

Secondly, the character appearance is very satisfactory, however there are a few lines that would have fit better into the personality section, but it is not a problem.

Speaking about the personality section, the way you write her makes her feel like a more dynamic character, but I can't help but feel she's a sort of 'loyal servant with an attitude' kind of character. That's just my opinion/perspective on her as a reader.

Next we have my favorite part: Her history. I can't express how much or why I love this. Despite it ends on somewhat of a cliffhanger, you would at least be able to figure out what happens afterwards by reading the rest of the application. It may have ended happy, but know you as a writer, I can tell many 'different' things are about to come. Marvelous, I'd say.

Finally we arrive to her statistics and fighting style, as well as the miscellaneous information provided to us:

Given her stats, history, the fact she is an NPC in the world of Mage Academy, and how you intend for her to be, I assign her the following statistics:

Physical: C
Magical: B
Intellectual: C


If you are not satisfied with these statistics, feel free to post in your reply and edit the statistics to your liking. Please note: With the site reform and changes just around the corner, these statistics are only temporary, and we will be adopting a new functional system and attempt to set everyone on equal footing.

As for her fighting style, I see no problems to it in general. It is set up in such a way that she feels more like a character than a player avatar. I am a bit concerned with the power it comes with, "it" referring to "Volcana" but I trust in you to not use it in an abusive way, just making this clear for other members and staff.

Finally: After application acceptance we're going to need you to make a weapon application for Riley's spear, Chastifiel.

That is all that I have to give on the subject matter at hand for my current post. Please reply with necessary feedback on the statistics and any changes you wish to make, it will be reviewed and approved in the same post if possible.

-Aleksey.


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PostSubject: Re: [NPC] Riley   Wed Jan 04, 2017 9:48 pm

Im okay with me! ^o.o^



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PostSubject: Re: [NPC] Riley   Thu Jan 05, 2017 11:10 am

Alright then. With the approval of two staff members as stated by the rules, and a formal review written and outlining statistics, I deem this character APPROVED!

You are hereby authorized to use this character as you see fit. Welcome to the Mage Academy, Riley.

You are approved to write one weapon and 3 spells by default.

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